tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31257856.post9095599281377841067..comments2024-02-29T09:31:25.294-05:00Comments on camera-obscura: for the writers in the housebilliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18187141867284800597noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31257856.post-64757765889794353962008-04-22T16:04:00.000-05:002008-04-22T16:04:00.000-05:00Arlene, actually you're right on target. As usual,...Arlene, actually you're right on target. As usual, I've turned it into a one way or the other issue when in reality it should be BOTH.<BR/><BR/>I think what you've hit on here is that the very best books (at least in my subjective opinion) are the ones that have both elements and therefore pull at a huge audience.<BR/><BR/>I'm thinking of Charles Frazier's Cold Mountain, Michael Ondaatje's The English Patient, Barbara Kingsolver's The Poisonwood Bible. These books do both things very well - they develop characters but they also have elements of suspense and intensity that propel the reader forward.<BR/><BR/>I guess what this comes down to is my ultimate goal in writing novels. I can do the literary part. Whether it would sell is another issue entirely. I could probably do the thriller/suspense part alone if I were willing to forego the subtleties of character to some degree and just Tell The Damn Story. (which is its own difficulty and challenge, and tougher for me than anything else)<BR/><BR/>But what I keep aiming for is to do both and do them well. And that takes work and time and editing. Hopefully one day I'll strike the balance.billiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18187141867284800597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31257856.post-13939259085615958332008-04-22T15:55:00.000-05:002008-04-22T15:55:00.000-05:00Peggy, good to see you here. My problem is two-fol...Peggy, good to see you here. My problem is two-fold. Often when I think I'm being intense, as you mentioned, readers view it as subtle.<BR/><BR/>But other times when I'm being intense, readers see it as melodramatic.<BR/><BR/>I guess finding the balance is a writerly skill that requires some mastery of the craft, particularly when it comes to the key pieces of action and the points where things hinge and turn.<BR/><BR/>My signs are imaginary, and one came from you:<BR/><BR/>What's at stake?<BR/><BR/>Dig deep.<BR/><BR/>I suppose now I need to add a third:<BR/><BR/>Strike the balance!billiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18187141867284800597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31257856.post-21006016681473717182008-04-22T14:45:00.000-05:002008-04-22T14:45:00.000-05:00I read his blog over at Murderati and it was very ...I read his blog over at Murderati and it was very good and gets you thinking. It did feel like a workshop with some very good points. You have asked what readers prefer subtlety or intensity, I think that is a hard one to answer. It would all depend on the book, but I'm inclined to think that one book could contain both elements and that would make it a very intriguing read. Elements of subtlety interspersed with intensity or vice versa if done smoothly would enrich the story line. On the other hand I may be missing the point completely as I was prone to do in school, sometimes everybody else would 'get it' and I would have a completely different idea of what I just read. So in closing I would say that I have been no help at all. I hope your scene comes together for you soon.Grey Horse Mattershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05837575441967937196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31257856.post-36024695978210948362008-04-22T12:25:00.000-05:002008-04-22T12:25:00.000-05:00This is also my biggest struggle. I call it clari...This is also my biggest struggle. I call it clarity. <BR/><BR/>I don't even attempt to be subtle, because when I set out to hit people over the head, it's viewed as subtle.<BR/><BR/>So it takes me so many drafts to make anything CLEAR!!!<BR/><BR/>I have signs on my computer now, three of them, saying: Remember to Say the Obvious, Nothing Goes Without Saying! and Compassion for the Reader, Without Condescension.<BR/><BR/>I don't know why this should be so hard.Peggy Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14504076672775821088noreply@blogger.com